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Wednesday, March 14, 2018

Show, But not tell.

Hey bloggers, I'm back with my learning. This week we are working on using descriptive language by sharing our writing straight onto our blog.  The challenge we have is to describe a place using only six sentences. After reading the description you need to guess the place that has been described. It would really help if you say what clues helped you come to this conclusion.

1. Water crashing into a big water pit.
2. Diving perfectly into deep water.
3. Bright green trees surrounding me like a big forest.
4. Water dripping down hard rocks
5. Loud water everywhere.
6. Insects crawling on the land.


Could you guess it?
Please leave your guesses in the comment area. Blog You Later!

2 comments:

  1. Hi im Ana from pcs.
    I like how your talking to the readers.
    from Ana

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  2. Hi Ana, Thank you for commenting on my post. I really appreciate your positive comment. Blog you later!

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