Cybersmart Commenting!

Hey viewers, I'm back with my learning. How was your 2 week holiday been, Mine was really fun. For Cybersmart last week, we were told to comment on someones blog in our school. Straight after we commented, we smrfed a drawing, copied and pasted our comment on the drawing. After, we had to improve/change our comment. There were three boxes that could help us with it. The boxes included PTH. (Positive, helpful and thoughtful) When you were finished you had to pick a buddy (My buddy was Abby)  and you had to read out both of the comments.

Here is my drawing!

I think that this was a great way to improve how you write your comments. My favourite part was improving my comment because next time I comment, I can add in my changes. My changes were adding my blog link, adding some better vocab and asking a question. Maybe you could try this, it could improve your commenting. Feel free to comment something positive. Blog you later!